真正的朋友AnFriendIndeed

　　AnFriendIndeed
　　Truefriendsalwayscometoyouwhentheirhelpisinneed。Theytrytheirbesttohelpyouwithoutthinkingwhattheycangetfromit。Thisinvariablywinsthemloveandrespectfromotbers，fortheydevotethemselvestothehappinessofothers。
　　Uptothetimeofmywritingthisarticle，Aerohasbeenhelpingmewithmyselectingthecourseswithgreateffort。Heisafriendlyandzealousguy。Ithinkhehasbeenlikedbyotherssincelongagobecauseofhischaracteristics。Heisalwaysbrisk，enthusiastic，energeticandheissmilingnomatterwhenorwhereyouseehim。However，Ilikehimforsomeotherreason。Itseemsthatbetweenusthereisaspecialwaytocommunicateanditsnottheusualwaythroughwhichwecommunicatesuchaswordsandgestures。HehasalwaysbeenafriendofminebecauseIlikethewayheactsandlivesandthewaywecommunicate。
　　Onemorningaweekago，hecametomeandaskedifhecouldbeofhelp。ActuallyIhadbeenworryingaboutmycourseofthissemesterfordayssinceIhadntgotanyEnglishcoursesyet！StillIwastotallycaughtoffguardbyAerosofferthoughhehadalwaysbeenkind。Ithoughtitwasmyownbusinessandithadneveroccurredtomethatsomeotherinpidualwouldoffertohelpwithmyselectingthecourses。SoIdeclinedhiskindness。Theverynextday，Igotacoughanditlaterturnedouttobeafourdayhighfever。Inthosedays，Iwasextremelyweakandlayinbedalldaylongandhardlyhadanystrengtheventoeat。IlostthepowertokeepaneyeonthepossiblevacanciesoftheEnglishcourseseversinceIgotahighfever。IbegantoregretdecliningAerosoffer。Justatthatmoment，Aerocalled，askingaboutmyhealthandtoldmetohaveagoodrest，sayingthathewouldshouldertheresponsibilityofselectingmyEnglishcoursesforme。NowIamwritingthisarticleasthehomeworkofthiswritingcourseandIdliketoreemphasizethatitisallduetomyfriendseffortthatIhavefinallymadeit。
　　Iwasreallygratefultohimwhenhecalledandofferedtohelpanditishardtoexpressmygratitudewithwords。AllIwanttosayaboutitisthatatthatmoment，Irealizedthathehadofferedtohelpnotbecauseitmadehimfeelhewasimportantbutbecausehemeantbusiness。Hesamanofintegrity。Iamproudofhavingsuchafriend。
　　简评
　　作者先写什么样的朋友是真正的朋友，然后介绍他就有这样一位能及时帮助别人又不图报答的好友。
　　利用选课这样一件事，作者栩栩如生地刻画了有血有肉的朋友。真正的朋友会在你需要时出现。本文描写生病后朋友再次打电话问候，并询问选课事宜。没有比得到朋友真诚而无私的帮助更令人快慰的事了。
　　不足之处在于思路欠清晰，段落间缺乏连贯，用词不够多样化。